Saturday, December 19, 2009

Can someone read my poem and give some advice/opinions/tips? Its about somewho is sick.?

I DON'T KNOW HOW CAN I MAKE IT RHYME! I WANT IT TO BE A RHYMING COUPLETCan someone read my poem and give some advice/opinions/tips? Its about somewho is sick.?
First of all, a couplet is two lines, and that is four.





Second, try looking for other words that convey your meaning at RhymeZone.com. It has both a rhyming dictionary and a thesauraus.





http://rhymezone.com/Can someone read my poem and give some advice/opinions/tips? Its about somewho is sick.?
The tingling sensation of my skin


My forehead aches and burns within


In my throat a frog I meet


While ice is chillin' my weary feet
Correlate each of these metaphoric statements into a feeling compassionate piece, such as--





The tingling upon my brow beats my mind soar


The frog in my neck, the pain surreal progesses evermore


The ice on my feet make me hesitate to move


The burn on my skin makes me witness her beroove





and so on and so forth~ make each rhyme be a bold dramatic statement that correlates with the pretense





You can do it, let those words flow freely
Try this:


The tingling on my skin


The ice is very thin


The frog in my throat


I need to get a boat








I don't know!

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