I DON'T KNOW HOW CAN I MAKE IT RHYME! I WANT IT TO BE A RHYMING COUPLETCan someone read my poem and give some advice/opinions/tips? Its about somewho is sick.?
First of all, a couplet is two lines, and that is four.
Second, try looking for other words that convey your meaning at RhymeZone.com. It has both a rhyming dictionary and a thesauraus.
http://rhymezone.com/Can someone read my poem and give some advice/opinions/tips? Its about somewho is sick.?
The tingling sensation of my skin
My forehead aches and burns within
In my throat a frog I meet
While ice is chillin' my weary feet
Correlate each of these metaphoric statements into a feeling compassionate piece, such as--
The tingling upon my brow beats my mind soar
The frog in my neck, the pain surreal progesses evermore
The ice on my feet make me hesitate to move
The burn on my skin makes me witness her beroove
and so on and so forth~ make each rhyme be a bold dramatic statement that correlates with the pretense
You can do it, let those words flow freely
Try this:
The tingling on my skin
The ice is very thin
The frog in my throat
I need to get a boat
I don't know!
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